First Impressions
by Leslie Noyes
He’d cultivated a gravelly voice, thinking it was sexy and maybe a bit authoritative.
She’d perfected a killer walk, seductive and full of promise.
Watching her closely he decided she was out of his league and never spoke a word within her hearing.
Thinking him aloof, she refused to take a single step, and simply ignored him.
The end.
A trip through life with fingers crossed and eternal optimism.
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The end! They didn’t even start 🙂
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Exactly
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I dunno. I still you got the beginnings of a book here. x
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I need to learn to like conflict. And to make myself build a storyline around conflict. It’s very hard for me.
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Well ..BTO, hone, you got a ton of conflict here in this opener with their ‘perfected’- and as the dudes would say.. them there ‘culteeevateed’ shit, so jest you quit kiddin’ xxxx
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Hmmm. I see what you mean. I’ll give it a go one if these days.
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No No… Come on. Quit kidding xxxxx
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A wonderful piece, young Leslie. It reminds me of a song by The Villagers my son introduced me to a few years back. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=L-HDkpgWZDM
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Thank you kind sir! I’ll watch when I’m back home.
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Mike I loved that video and song! Thank you!
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