Calloused

  

Calloused

hands that carve or dig or plane,
roughed up, describe a textured

tale of hard years and harder days
whether laid end to end or stacked

in geologic layers: holocene, triassic,
permian. no oil struck or fossils

unearthed. jutting epidermal extensions,
thumb worn, subconsciously worrying

round and round. callous, unfeeling? or ultimate badge of survival?

  
 

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Author: nananoyz

I'm a semi-retired crazy person with one husband and two cats.

6 thoughts on “Calloused”

  1. This is a thought-provoking poem. I thought the pictures that went with it were well chosen too. I’ve sometimes heard it said that you can read all about a person’s life in his or her face and hands. That may be why I always wear a paper bag and a pair of gloves.

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    1. My husband worked his way up in career. Started in a mechanics position–callouses, broken nails, the whole bit. He was kind of a snob to men whose hands weren’t calloused. Now he’s been in management for nearly half of his career and his hands are as smooth as the proverbial baby’s butt. I give him hell about it, too.

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  2. Wonderful poem and excellently evocative images!

    Now for the gentle editorial stuff:

    1) Triassic

    2) technically all geologic periods require capitalization but that’s grammar and everybody knows that “poetic license” really means “ß#£k grammar”!

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