Secrets

8 thoughts on “Secrets”

1. the photo – as often in your posts – is such a seamless fit 🙂 I repeated the verses over a number of times, trying to figure how you placed such a “soft… soothing.. silent…” feel to them and bingo: all those Ss! this is a technical question: did you craft that purposely? are Ss meant to be soft or does the repetition do it?

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   1. This poem I did craft consciously, but only after much trial and error. Most of my stuff starts out clunky and only after I revisit it a bazillion times do I say, oh wait, it should be this instead of that.

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      1. thanks for explaining, so re-re-re-visiting is the key to apparent simplicity after all 🙂

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      2. Seems to be in my case!

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2. It is beautiful! Perhaps some secrets are locked between the objects and their reflections.

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   1. My beautiful former sister-in-law took the photo. Her father was a professional photographer and she’s certainly got his eye, I think.

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      1. The image is beautiful indeed, but it was your poem that I loved the most.

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      2. Oh thank you!

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