He offered her a cloth
of intricately woven golden
threads, beautiful, yet
comforting, a shelter from
her storms.
Gratefully she accepted his
gift of warmth and love,
marveling at the complexity
of the workmanship and moved
by his generosity.
Bound by his offering, they
found peace and filled
their lives with love and
laughter, until she
noticed a tiny imperfection
in the cloth.
It wasn’t much, just a hint
of gray in the golden threads,
but it caused a dissatisfaction
in her restless spirit, and
old storms brewed anew.
Try as she might she could
not ignore the gray amidst
the gold.
Maybe, she thought, I can just
pull out this thread and all
will be well with my heart.
But once begun the task had
no end.
Gray became the color of
her discontent. One thread
led to another until she
touched more gray than
gold.
He watched her snipping
threads, not knowing how
to help, loving her even
as she worked at dismantling
his gift, his heart.
In the end, she sat alone
surrounded by threads of
gray and gold.
Too late she realized
the gray strands
were ones she’d added to
the tapestry by joining
her life to his.

Oh, how sad! Some people just seem to fit, and as a pair they are far stronger and happier than they ever would be apart. But perhaps there are others who, love each other though they may, just shouldn’t be together.
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Lovely work, many congratulations; and a fine drawing to accompany it too. Somehow, I was reminded of this:
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Thank you! I haven’t yet watched the video, but will when I return home.
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Very insightful. Wow.
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Thanks Amy.
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I like this poem, it reminds me of my mum and dad.
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I have been guilty of unraveling from time to time.
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